Review: Fighting for Flight

Fighting for Flight by J.B. Salsbury

My rating: 0 of 5 stars



OK so had to stop at 24%...some sorta spoilers below Warning...well as many as can have in just 24% of book. writing is funny...I liked it. I really did. But just so many things that annoyed me. Don't give a crap about grammar or writing structure,(mine sucks so not going to judge on that), so that was ok. But OMG there were just so many thing I could not get over. SO much growling, giggling, moaning, and crying/whining.

Not sure why people like this guy Jonah. All that is going for him is he is hot sexy fighter, rich, and has sad past. (alright sounds ok to me)

So I'm annoyed at stupid little things that just bugged me too much to go on:

at 10% I was liking it a good amount, but was irritated that bad ass girl mechanic can't open a bottle of water? It's a small insignificant incident that just bothered me a wee bit. I mean she works with her hands, come on
(loved the grease fight though so kept reading)

13% ok again just we bit annoyed that she was not wearing work gloves and got finger cut....not even just Disposable Gloves ...I guess not all mechanics wear gloves, but a girl that has sooo much Victoria secrets undies I would think does not have gross work hands…..again small insignificant incident that bothered me...

Again annoyed about the comment that she’s going to give cat generic food for 6 months to make up for splurging on an overpriced bathing suit…...I guess my pets are like my children….and hearing someone say “oh I will give them crap food so I can look hot in an over priced outfit”...wished she would have just said something like” oh have to have generic coffee creamer or no meat for 6 months”...but wherever probably again something that only really annoys me.

..she goes over to his bbq and just wants to sit out in the lounge chair to get sun….rather than hang with him? ahh ok...

Oh more cat fun! (loved that she calls the cat Dog).”oh I can’t move in with you because I have to feed the cat that I don't care very much about”. Not “oh I just met you 7 days ago and you are a womanizing jerk whose last lay I just met”….”oh I am a virgin,dads a pimp,Moms a whore”


24% and I am done...really really wanted to like this and even now I want to keep reading…there's some funny writing and a cool plot? but I I just can’t….I don’t know I guess I just don’t get this book. maybe I will come back later..or maybe not



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